Wednesday, January 6, 2016

part:1

This is one of my favorite pictures of the year because a lots happen in 2015 against the police and african american and it just gets me thinking.

This is one of my favorite pictures because it shows how much people care about living creatures and that people make mistakes.


This is one  of my favorite pictures because it is so sweet and it makes me feel grateful for my life and that am still here and not dead like this young man.

part:2

I chose this because The Weeknd is my life i love all his songs,.I was attracted to this song because its one of his most popular and my favorite.It was  the best of 2015 because he came back and he got known more and more and he just lit up so fast and he has about 5 top number 1 hits and he was the most takes about his hair and he's came a long way he hasn't been big since 2012. So i chose this because he never gave up.


I chose this as my main choice because in my opinion this was the best movie it was full of action and suspense.The things that attracted me to this choice was that it was about finding who you are and where u belong and it reminded me of every day life. It was the best of 2015 because its about sports and every one loves movies that have to do with sports and it had a big plot twist which made this movie different.



 The most important news story of the year was the attack on pairs. This was my main choice because it was the most talked about the most news reports and most terrifying thing that had to do with terrorist. I was attracted to this because we americans stick together and when one of get hurt it hurts us all and so many people died that day too. It was the best of 2015 because it was the most shocking to here that happen and it was talked about for a long time.






This was my main chose because he was the most takes about.



Wednesday, December 2, 2015

First draft

Faith Terrazas 
Period 7 12/2/15



 The Real Me
  Rebecca Rocha was pregnant at a very young age, lived on her own, only relied on what she could afford at the time when she need someone the most.


   "I was very young and in the moment and didn't think that there was anything to it,'' Rebecca said. "I didn't know that I was going to get pregnant at the time thought we used a condom and I didn't take the morning after pill."

   Rebecca was naive and very sneaky she was always in trouble and didn't care what anyone thought about her she didn't have many friends and those who where her friends where lucky because she like a lot of people.

   "I didn't know her like all personally at the time but I would hear that’s she would all ways getting trouble with her boy friend and was a very independent women,'' Steve said. "Rebecca was a troublemaker and didn't care about the rules she was breaking.''

     Rebecca drove her parents insane. They all ways got phones calls and caught her sneaking out with boys and causing a lot of drama with her parents. Rebecca hated her stepmother with every bone in her body. Her step mom and her never got a long they always argued about every little thing.

     Her father didn't like the idea of her being pregnant and was very ashamed of her.

"I didn't like that my daughter was pregnant and living under my roof at that she was always sneaking out no wonder she got pregnant am surprised it wasn't younger," Ben Rodriguez said.

" Her and her father had a rocky relationship from time to time,'' Claire Rodriguez said.

      Her youngest sister Cassidy was not the person she would count on to keep a secret when she saw Rebecca doing thing she wasn't suppose to.

" I was known as the snitch when I was younger,'' Cassidy said.
  
 Cassidy always look up to her older sister and wanted to be just like her but it didn't work out that way she ended following her own path and dreams but she still looks up to her till this day. 


  "She wasn't the best role model for her younger sister she wasn't the one to sit at home and do her home work,'' Ben said.

    Rebecca was out and about when she hit the age 16 she was barley at the house as it was but she also had a bad attitude inside sources say she would always come home and disrespect her stepmom.

   "I was your typical teenager I was rebellious and thought I was an adult though that I was old enough to get a job and raise a family on my own,'' Rebecca said.

     Claire Rodriguez was Rebeccas real mom she never saw her often because her dad and mom were divorced so when she told her mom the news she was not happy about it.

     " Rebecca was not my only child but she was my only daughter and her getting pregnant at a young age was not okay with me I wanted her to grow up get a carrier and then have a family I didn't need a pregnant daughter that early,'' Claire Rodriguez.

      Rebecca was a little scared to tell her mom the new because she was afraid of what her mom would think of her so didn't tell her right away she gave it a couple of weeks to get her story straight to tell her mom.

     "I didn't tell my mom right away I was pregnant because I know she wasn't going to except that I was a young girl didn't have my life together or anyway to support my baby because I known if I did it would of just caused drama between us,'' Rebecca said.

      Rebecca's dad ended up kicking her out when they found out she was pregnant. She had no where to go so she went to go live her grandma who rested her as if she was her kid help her out with supplies for the baby and a meal for her to eat. Her grandma ended up being like her mom and her dad supporting her all the way.

      " I all ways thought to my self if I had lived with my grandma sooner if I would still be pregnant but I known she wouldn't have kicked me out to the curve when I need her the most I could only thank her for all the thing she had did for me back then and I still am thanking her,'' Rebecca said.

      She thanked her grandma for every thing she did for her Rebecca wanted to live on her own with the baby coming they were at capacity and if she had lived there and the baby and the father of her kid they would have no room for everything. She found apartment right in front of a sonic.

    "If I moved there I wouldn't be that far away from my family while at work,'' Rebecca said. "So she applied for a working position at sonic she could be close to her family and at the time she didn't even have a car so she was saving money for the baby.''

     The moment they been preparing for the baby was born on June 6,1994 the day their lives changed forever. The second day they where clear to go home with the baby and she didn't work for a good while so her husband Joe had to work to keep the rent paid after the baby was born it was a struggle to keep the rent pay and take care of the baby. Joe was known by a lot of people his friends and some not his friends. One day Rebecca and Joes life changed


  " I was in the kitchen cooking dinner and Joe was in the living room and the window was open and the crazy thing is that we lived on the three floor to while we heard these guys call out Joes name and he got u to go check and when he look out it happen so fast I just remember him laying on the floor with a bullet hole right though his chest that night every thing changed for us."Rebecca said.

    She had just witness  her husbands death it was the worst time for all this as they were running low on money and someone to watch the baby she was broken she called nine one one his death was September 5, 1998 at 11:38 p.m. died at the scene.

   "He was died at the scene I couldn't live knowing my husband was shot through that window so we moved to the south side in these other apartments I felt empty I thought I would never get over losing my husband but time went one Kirsten was barley going into third grade when another man came in my life," Rebecca said. 

    Rebecca got pregnant and had another kid she was born February 8, 2001 they named her Faith.

   "every thing was different know two kids a died husband and a new husband life but I wouldn't have changed a thing and I wouldn't have had two beautiful children that I love and would be scared to lose." Rebecca said.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           
   
       

CE 3.3


  1. The goals are improving fighting disease , improving education and building a strong community.
  2. The three major reason are smaller classes ,training for the teachers and full day schooling.
  3. The newest downtown condo will be 58 stories and it is significant because its going to be the tallest tower in Austin.
  4. David Price will be making $217 million dollars over the next 7 years.
  5. I would not eat Texas trash because margarine bacon droppings does not sound good to eat at all.
  6. Homeboy industries is an organization that works to give  second chances  to those just out of prison and to former gang member who wants to change their life. thought it was a compelling read it did interest me into knowing more.I thought it was crazy that they have a cooking industry for people who are fresh out of jail o gang members who want to change there life's.

Monday, November 30, 2015

Feature story notes

Did your mom except you being a pregnant?
My mom did  not except me being pregnant.
What made you think it was okay to have sex so young?
I wasn't that young of age i was technical a legal adult.
What would you have done different?
I would have waited until i had a career or at least stability.
Would you change your past life?
I would not change much but there are something i would like to change.
Who was your first love?
My first love was a guy name Javier.
Where you a good kid or bad and why?
I was a typical teenager so rebellious here and there.
How old where you when you had sex for the first time?
The first time i had sex was when i was 18 years old.
How old where you when you had your first kid?
When i had my first kid i was 21 years old.
Why did hate your stepmother so much?
I hated my step mother because she was very mean to me and treated me lie i was nothing.
If you had lived with grandma before you were pregnant would you have still done it?
If i had lived with my grandma before i was pregnant i probably wouldn't have.
Why did you treat your sister the way you did?
I treated her that way because i like to pick on her because she was younger and annoying.
Would you have treated your sister differently?
I would have not treated any different if i had the chance.
Would you have changed your relationship with your grandma?
I would never change my relationship with her, i probably had a better relationship with her than any of my other family members.
How where you at the age of 15?
At the age 15 i was very independent and on the verge of living on my own.
Was there any regrets of having a kid so young and being on your own?
I don't have any regrets but it would have been better if i was older and had a career to fall back on.
How Was your childhood?
My childhood was very difficult at times but i got through it.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   
Would you have lived with your grandma sooner?
I would have lived with her sooner then i already did.
Why did you get kicked out?
I got kicked out because my parents didn't like that i was pregnant so young and living under there roof.
Would you fix the past with your stepmother?
I would not change the past with her the past is the past and its done and other with.
How did your actions affect your parents feeling towards you?  

My action towards my parents feeling created at lot of drama between all of us during the time.   

Thursday, November 19, 2015

Checklist for Feature Story

1. Mom

2.Steve(friend), Grandpa,Grandma(Mom and Dad), Aunt Chassidy(sister).

3. Her childhood and the things she did when she was young.

4. Historical features.

5.

  1. What were some of your experience as a child?
  2. Why did you do what you did as a kid?
  3. What would you have done different?
  4. Would you change your past life?
  5. Who was your first love?
  6. Where you a good kid or bad and why?
  7. How old where you when you had sex for the first time?
  8. How old where you when you had your first kid?
  9. Why did hate your stepmother so much?
  10. Why did you never see your mom when you where young?
  11. Why did you treat your sister the way you did?
  12. Would you have treated your sister differently?
  13. Would you have changed your relationship with your grandma?
  14. How where you at the age of 15?
  15. Where you a trouble maker or a good good?
  16. Was your childhood terrible?
  17. Would you have lived with your grandma sooner?
  18. Why did you get kicked out?
  19. Would you fix the past with your step mom?
  20. How did your actions affect your parents.       
6.
  1. How was y'all's relationship?
  2. Why weren't you always there for her?
  3. Why did you kick her out when she need you most?
  4. Did you look up to her in your young ages?Do you still?
  5. Was it a hard decision to let her go?
7. 
  1. The rate of teen pregnancy is a total 1,000 women a year.
  2. The normal teen mom ages is 15-19.
  3. 26% of babies come from freshman in high school.
  4. 15-19year olds are known for having more than one kid.
  5. Hispanics 15-19 have the highest young pregnancy rate.
8. Over Thanksgiving.

9. My moms work office.

10. Ask permission to record the conversation.


CE 3.2

1. The unusual requests made by the defense attorney for VonTrey  Clarks murder arraignment is to prevent attorneys and witnesses from speaking publicly about the case.

2.Students at president are sitting in the presidents office because they ant to improve the social and academic experiences of black students on campus.

3.The current four team that are predicted to play in the collage football play-offs are Clemson,Ohio State, Alabama , Oklahoma State.

4. The five "platinum" biker-friendly cities in the united states are Madison , Wisconsin , Fort Collins and Boulder, Colorado, Portland, Oregon, and Davis, California.

5. The other films that were compared to the final Hunger Games film is "Star Wars Episode VI:Return of the Jedi""The lord of the Rings:The return of the King""The twilight saga:Breaking Dawn-part 2""Harry Potter ad the Deathly Hallows:part 2"

6. I think that it is a good decision because we need to get the best education that we can get. That would offend all of the african american students and would unacceptable to put that in public schools.The book should be re checked by experts because they know the information good and the kids will learn better if they know the right information. I think they can be but if there not updated early then not really.

Friday, November 13, 2015

feature writing preview

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2.



A. 1
B. 1
C. 1
D. 1
E. 1
F.  1

3.Yes there are quotes.

4.Yes.

5. The boss and Williams quoted in the story.

6.The boss.


7. There is 34 paragraphs.

8.762 words.

9. The last paragraph sets the mood and it builds suspense.

10. I think the writer did this because it sets the town and it made you want to read the story and wath the video more and more.

11. It was sorta interesting to read about.

12.Yes because int he story they kept talking about the v lice and i didn't know what it sounded lie so i wanted to hear it so i would understand he story better like they do or so i can be apart of it.

13.The  video had a bigger image of the story.

14. Yes, because the last paragraph wouldn't have been the same without the video.

15.Yes.

16. The writer would say what the voice  said in italicized letters then after that he would kinda explain what how the voice that sentence.