Lone Star Dispatch Issue #1-news evaluation

Age old battle still on going 
who;parker smith
what;rape culture
where;at bowie high school
when;september 4, 2015
why;she got dress coded
how;she posted on her twitter about the incident
SUMMARY
Parker Smith is a senior at bowie high school and she says that she was dress coded unfairly. She had posted her incident on twitter and it only took 16 hours for her story to become a hot topic on twitter, she got a lot of support but also got some hate. Her and her parents went to the administration to talk about the dress code to see if they can change it but only change some things about it. Her and her parents requested a meeting but was denied. Just like when Parker was pulled into the office and there where a gout of people in there and her mom was on the phone
''i was total blindsided i didn't even have time to process what was happening it was totally  unnecessary''Parkers mom said.

People quoted 
*Parker Smith
*Jennifer Smith
*Brandon Smith
*Principal Stephen Kane
(direct quotes)


There is no statements/transition sentences.


This title does indicate what is going on in the story and the problem is old but its still going on. But i don't think it says what the battle  is.

No
Building a better education thanks to AISD bond-
who;AISD
what;new equipment
where;Bowie high school
when;2015-2016
why;help out the students with a better environment
how;building new training rooms and kitchen
SUMMARY
they are building a training room for the students to help them get back on the team and in school, and they also build  new kitchen so the culinary arts students can learn more things.

PEOPLE QUOTED
*Pablo Riera
*Brittani Thibodeuax
*Richard Winmiller
(direct quotes)


There is no statements/transition sentences.

The title does indicate what is going on in the story because we did get new equipment to help out the students get better quicker and easter and more can get better at once.

Yes


SAT and ACT will change in March-
who;Students
what;SAT and ACT changes
where;all over
when;March 2016
why;to help us out get a better score on the test
how;changing the reading section

SUMMARY
The SAT and ACT are changing the reading section of the test they are making the test where we get to choose the book we want to read.

People Quoted-
*Pfieffer
*ISABELA Dobernez
*Ricky Ramiez
(direct quotes)

There is no statements/transition sentences.

The title does indicate what is going on in the story because its tell us exactly whats going on in the article and whats is about.

yes

Fit bell schedule remains the same after proposals last year 

who;Students 

what;Bell schedule 

where;Bowie high school 

when;this school year 

why;help out the students

how;rearranging the schedule 

SUMMARY

Instead of having A classes monday and wednesday,B classes tuesdays and thursdays , and then fridays switching off we are just alternating between A and B days. We are also having FIT every tuesday and wednesday. Most people like this schedule a lot better.

People Quoted-
* Nicole Moore
*Kalia Aquino
*Patricia Conroy
*Sahaj Mann
*Lili Benitez
(direct quotes)

There is no statements/transition sentences.

The title does indicate  what is going on in the story because the story did tell about the bell schedule.

No.

AISD GIVES SCHOOL BOND FOR CAMPUS RENOVATIONS-
who;AISD
what;gave bowie a bond
where;in 2013
when;Bowie high school
why;because it need to be remodeled
how;changing old things with new

SUMMARY-
In 2013 AISD gave Bowie 16.5 million dollars to make the school better. They changes the clocks, TV, air conditioner, athletics hall,and they painted. A lot of the teachers and students like the new changes.


People Quoted-
*Vicki Hebert
*Tanner Howell
*Robert Rasmus
(direct quotes)

There is no statements/transition sentences.

The title does indicate what  the story was talking about because the story did tell how AISD helped Bowie.

Yes.