Lone Star Dispatch Issue #3

 News:Opportunities down in Florida
1.   This story was about 6 member of the new paper staff 's  convention trip to Orlando, Florida in November. The convention proved workshop that mainly focused on three categories writing, photography,and graphic design.The six members learned a lot on that trip to Florida and new information and pushed them to always keep going and keep improving they also came closer with a lot of the other members on the trip and played games and had a great time.
2.  Sophomore Olivia Glenewins , and senior Jasmine Correa had ver good quotes.
3.  Not really, it had a very weak intro i was into it just not as much to where i want to keep reading what its about.
4.The conclusion was a quote.
5.Olivia,Jasmine,Carissa,Mia had strong quotes. Commentary:Growing panic for school safety
1:  This story was about how we need to take our (students) safety seriously and that we could be attacked by any body at any time. Also that our school doesn't have that much protection to the students safety and that we need a better look outs to see who is leaving the school and that some of our staff isn't prepared for terrorist attacks.
2.   The commentary doesn't have any quotes.
3.   Yes, it did have a good into but it could do better but other then that it was good i got interested when i saw ISIS.
4.  The conclusion is a statement.
5. no quotes Student Life: Pet rescue strikes a cord with a pair of animal lovers
1:  This story is about two juniors that volunteer at a animal shelter on there weekends. They help out by feeding them, taking them out and making sure there water is fresh and it also depends on there location because at different locations they have different things they need to do there.But taking care of animal isn't always fun and games they have to make sure the animal its hurt and take carte of it when its scared.
2. Junior Ajaz had very good quotes about what she does at each location.
3. The into was okay it wasn't very eye taking but it was a good story.
4. The conclusion is statement.
5.Ajaz and alex had strong quotes. Entertainment:In review: Mockingjay part2 
1.  This story is about the movie hunger games and how the person lie it and what there thoughts where on it. He also descried how they charters where in the movie as well, he described the death of Finnick  in a graphs way that it could of been done in a more portrayed better like the character prim died.
2. The entertainment doesn't have any quotes.
3. Yes , it had a good intro and i did want to keep reading learning more about the movie.
4. The conclusion is a statement.
5. no quotes
Athletics:Girls basketball thrives through the seasons challenges
1.  This story was about the girls basketball team season and there 11-4 record. the players have to stay healthy and work together to play in their next game.
2.Vickie,Amber,Kinna, all had strong quotes.
3.The strongest quote was Vickie Benson about there health.
4. It kinda had a good into but it was about sports so i kept reading.
5.the conclusion is a statement.
Part 2: 1. My favorite photo is a drawing by liana Lynch. It my favorite because its funny and it shows how she feels about the schools safety and how she thinks about the world.

2. My least favorite photo is drawing by Gavin Farner. Its my least favorite because its really sloppy and looked like it was rushed and doesn't really explain whats happening in the picture and he could of took his time.

3. I think if i was a photographer i would like to do athletics the most and i think it would be the most fun as well.

4.8/10
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