Feature story notes

Did your mom except you being a pregnant?
My mom did  not except me being pregnant.

What made you think it was okay to have sex so young?

I wasn't that young of age i was technical a legal adult.
What would you have done different?

I would have waited until i had a career or at least stability.
Would you change your past life?

I would not change much but there are something i would like to change.
Who was your first love?

My first love was a guy name Javier.
Where you a good kid or bad and why?

I was a typical teenager so rebellious here and there.
How old where you when you had sex for the first time?

The first time i had sex was when i was 18 years old.
How old where you when you had your first kid?

When i had my first kid i was 21 years old.
Why did hate your stepmother so much?

I hated my step mother because she was very mean to me and treated me lie i was nothing.
If you had lived with grandma before you were pregnant would you have still done it?

If i had lived with my grandma before i was pregnant i probably wouldn't have.
Why did you treat your sister the way you did?

I treated her that way because i like to pick on her because she was younger and annoying.
Would you have treated your sister differently?

I would have not treated any different if i had the chance.
Would you have changed your relationship with your grandma?

I would never change my relationship with her, i probably had a better relationship with her than any of my other family members.
How where you at the age of 15?

At the age 15 i was very independent and on the verge of living on my own.
Was there any regrets of having a kid so young and being on your own?

I don't have any regrets but it would have been better if i was older and had a career to fall back on.
How Was your childhood?

My childhood was very difficult at times but i got through it.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   
Would you have lived with your grandma sooner?

I would have lived with her sooner then i already did.
Why did you get kicked out?

I got kicked out because my parents didn't like that i was pregnant so young and living under there roof.
Would you fix the past with your stepmother?

I would not change the past with her the past is the past and its done and other with.
How did your actions affect your parents feeling towards you?  
My action towards my parents feeling created at lot of drama between all of us during the time.   

Checklist for Feature Story

1. Mom

2.Steve(friend), Grandpa,Grandma(Mom and Dad), Aunt Chassidy(sister).

3. Her childhood and the things she did when she was young.

4. Historical features.

5.

1. What were some of your experience as a child?
2. Why did you do what you did as a kid?
3. What would you have done different?
4. Would you change your past life?
5. Who was your first love?
6. Where you a good kid or bad and why?
7. How old where you when you had sex for the first time?
8. How old where you when you had your first kid?
9. Why did hate your stepmother so much?
10. Why did you never see your mom when you where young?
11. Why did you treat your sister the way you did?
12. Would you have treated your sister differently?
13. Would you have changed your relationship with your grandma?
14. How where you at the age of 15?
15. Where you a trouble maker or a good good?
16. Was your childhood terrible?
17. Would you have lived with your grandma sooner?
18. Why did you get kicked out?
19. Would you fix the past with your step mom?
20. How did your actions affect your parents.       

6.

1. How was y'all's relationship?
2. Why weren't you always there for her?
3. Why did you kick her out when she need you most?
4. Did you look up to her in your young ages?Do you still?
5. Was it a hard decision to let her go?

7. 

1. The rate of teen pregnancy is a total 1,000 women a year.
2. The normal teen mom ages is 15-19.
3. 26% of babies come from freshman in high school.
4. 15-19year olds are known for having more than one kid.
5. Hispanics 15-19 have the highest young pregnancy rate.

8. Over Thanksgiving.

9. My moms work office.

10. Ask permission to record the conversation.

CE 3.2

1. The unusual requests made by the defense attorney for VonTrey  Clarks murder arraignment is to prevent attorneys and witnesses from speaking publicly about the case.

2.Students at president are sitting in the presidents office because they ant to improve the social and academic experiences of black students on campus.

3.The current four team that are predicted to play in the collage football play-offs are Clemson,Ohio State, Alabama , Oklahoma State.

4. The five "platinum" biker-friendly cities in the united states are Madison , Wisconsin , Fort Collins and Boulder, Colorado, Portland, Oregon, and Davis, California.

5. The other films that were compared to the final Hunger Games film is "Star Wars Episode VI:Return of the Jedi""The lord of the Rings:The return of the King""The twilight saga:Breaking Dawn-part 2""Harry Potter ad the Deathly Hallows:part 2"

6. I think that it is a good decision because we need to get the best education that we can get. That would offend all of the african american students and would unacceptable to put that in public schools.The book should be re checked by experts because they know the information good and the kids will learn better if they know the right information. I think they can be but if there not updated early then not really.

feature writing preview

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3.Yes there are quotes.

4.Yes.

5. The boss and Williams quoted in the story.

6.The boss.

7. There is 34 paragraphs.

8.762 words.

9. The last paragraph sets the mood and it builds suspense.

10. I think the writer did this because it sets the town and it made you want to read the story and wath the video more and more.

11. It was sorta interesting to read about.

12.Yes because int he story they kept talking about the v lice and i didn't know what it sounded lie so i wanted to hear it so i would understand he story better like they do or so i can be apart of it.

13.The  video had a bigger image of the story.

14. Yes, because the last paragraph wouldn't have been the same without the video.

15.Yes.

16. The writer would say what the voice  said in italicized letters then after that he would kinda explain what how the voice that sentence. 

peer reflection #2

1. Ellies C.
2. There stores about violence on the television.
3. There direct opinion about television violence is that its become  an unpleasant experience.
4. No i didn't see where they address the other side.
5. No they weren't that wishy washy but they could've done better.
6. No there is no quotes.
7. 1st person.
8. I could not tell but i think they were trying to do editorial piece.

peer reflection #1

1. Alyssa A.
2. Dress codes why they should be banished.
3. Her direct opinion about the topic is that she wants dress codes to be banned and she doesn't like to have them at her school.
4. Yes she did address the topic in her story.
5. NO she wasn't wishy washy about her topic she keep the same opinion thru the whole story.
6. No there aren't any quotes.
7. This is in first person.
8. No i couldn't tell that much but i think she was trying to write an editorial piece.

CE 3.1

1.Travis county wants to an the confederate flag from a parade because its a political symbol of hatred and racism.

2.Julian Hernandez figured out he was a victim of kidnapping by his father by applying to college when something went wrong with his social security number that when he found out his real name and what happen append to him when he was 5 years old.

3.A group of kids have to climb  a letter to get to school because  the property owner decide it was best for the students to take a bus then build a side walk but they don't have a bus to take them because they are to close to the school  so they use a latter  to get to school.

4.Whole food is in the super market business.
*Amplify snacks is in the food/snack business.
*Homwaway is the online vacation rental industry .

5.Elena Donio is one of the few women leaders  of a technology company and she is also has a big love for fashion... she is trying to make tech more applying to women and she mentors other women who want tech career and a family.

6.

1. This article/story is opinion piece.
2. The argument he was making 
3. 
   

Normal opinion piece

Social Media affects children's education

Social media is websites and applications that are used in every day life and is used to create and share content all around the world with each other.I think social media id good for children's education because it will give the easier access to thing and they can make new things inline then they can with just a paper and pen.

    Social networking communities are here to stay, social networking has increased the rate and quality of collaboration for students.It helps them communicate ,meeting times,sharing information quickly then they would reading a big book to find it,Which can increase productivity and help them learn how to work in the real world and get them ready for the future.

    Social networking teaches student skills they'll need to survive in the business  world. Being able to create and maintain connections to many people in many industries is an integral part of developing a career or building a business now a days so children have to now how things work young or there bonn be lost when there older cause there they new future.

     By spending so much time working with new technologies, student develop more more familiarity with computers and others electronic devices. With the increased focus on the technology in education and business, this will help student build skills that will aid them throughout their lives and help with future business and schools and a new education for how the students learn.

    The ease with which a student can customize their profile makes them more aware of basic aspects of design and layout that are not often taught in school. Buliding  resumes and personal  websites which are increasingly used as online portfolios benefit greatly from the skill obtained by customizing the layout and designs of social networking profiles so that kids can get ready for the time a head.

      The ease and speed with which users can upload pictures, videos or stories has resulted in a greater amount of sharing of creative works. Being able to get instant feedback from friends and family on their creative outlets helps students refine and develop their creative and can provide much needed confidence or help them decide what career path they may want to pursue and how well they will do social media also helps with scores on test and taking test its easier to take n on the computer then on paper and pen and when you can have them read it to you on auto voice and its very good for middle school students going into hight school to help make there schedules and check the grades and home work excitements as well.

        The other side mite say social media is bad for children the reason why many students rely on the accessibility of information on social media specifically and the web in general to provide answers. That means a reduced focus on learning and retaining information.

        Students who attempt to multi-task checking social media sites while studying shows show reduced academic performance their ability to concebtraye on the task  at hand is significantly reduced by the distraction that are brought about by YouTube, Facebook, or Twitter .

      The more time students spend on social sites the less time they spend socializing in person. Because of the lack of body signals and other nonverbal cues , like tone and inflection , social networking sites are not an adequate replacement for face to face communication. Students who spend a great deal of time on social networking are less able to effectively communicate in person or with other.

      The popularity of social media and the speed at which information is published has created a lax attitude towards proper spelling and grammar. The reduces a students ability to effectively write without relying on a computers spelling check feature to fix there mistakes that they make every time they write something down or if they even do.

        The degree to which private information is available online and the anonymity the internet seems to provide has made students forget the need to filter the information they post.Many colleges and potential employers investigate an applicants social networking profiles before granting acceptance or interviews.Most students don't constantly evaluate the content they're publishing online which can bring about negative consequences months or years down the road.
      

Editorials and personal columns

Three ideas for editorial
*Students being late to FIT/class/school

*Cell phone addition/online acces

*student bulling /making fun other students or teachers






I look up what The Weenknd/Abel is doing on a day to day bases to see what is going on with him.I always check his social media because he's one of my favorite musician  and i think he's really hot.

peer reflection #2

1.Gigi Francis
2.Police violence
3." There are still people today are still looked at and judged by people if they are darker or wear different clothing. People should not be judged on the color of there skin and the way they dress and look."
4.Yes she did she taped about how the other side mite feel about it.
5.No she wasn't wishy washy about her opinion she stuck with her opinion throughout the whole story.
6.No there aren't any quotes.
7.1st person




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peer reflection #1

1.Cat Camacho
2.STAAR testing is not necessary
3."I don't think STAAR testing is necessary because some kids might not be good test takers and most kids get nervous to take big test"
4. Yes they did by saying "Other people might say, if they know the information then they will be fine taking the test."
5.No they weren't wishy washy she kept the same opinion through he whole story it never change not even when she explained the other side be cause the other side could be persuading.
6.no 
7.1st person




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